Review by Tobin Elliott: FEAR TRIGGER, by Daniel J. Barnes

Review by Tobin Elliott: FEAR TRIGGER, by Daniel J. Barnes

A psychological ghost story with a message for all on mental health and well being.

Jack Heron must venture back to his childhood home, where he must confront the apparitions that dwell inside the old Heron House and tortured him as a child. It is time for Jack to face his fears.

Ah, what to say about this slim novel?

Well, the first thing I’ll say is, the amount of horrors and creepiness that Barnes packs into a couple of hundred pages is actually astounding. This isn’t a basic McDonald’s hamburger of horror, this is a big ol’ Grand Big Mac…with extra bacon.

I can honestly say that, through the bulk of this novel, I kept thinking, Goddamn, this would make a fantastic movie. And that’s also a testament to Barnes’s writing, in that he’s a very visual writer. Some describe actions well—and Barnes does—some do great dialogue—and Barnes does—but I don’t find as many authors can describe a setting or room in a way that’s not tedious, and still puts you right in the middle of it. Barnes does.

But I digress. So, there’s horrors galore, but what about the story?

Barnes does a great thing here: he takes a very simple, very common horror trope—a family member dies and drags the protagonist back home unwillingly to settle things—but he twists and bends it into new shapes. The story’s familiar, but the stuff that goes on in the house are wonderfully envisioned.

I don’t want to delve too much into the story, because to do so enters into spoiler territory. But I will say, the ending was a surprise, and the author’s afterword was both heartbreaking and inspiring.

It’s an independently published book—and seriously, check him out, because he’s prolific and varied and has brilliant ideas—and there are a few minor spelling and grammatical errors, but nothing egregious.

Seriously though, come for the scares, stay for the insights.

Well done.

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Tobin has been writing so long, there was very likely some graffiti to be found in his mother's womb. He's tried writing a few things, but his diseased little mind always came around to horror, despite all the sour looks he got when he revealed that. Somewhere along the way, he also found a woman that has put up with his crap for over thirty years, and two kids (who somehow survived to adulthood, despite having him as a parent) who are mostly not that embarrassed by him. Mostly. For quite a while, he held a respectable job with a respectable corporation where he was a communications specialist, but now he's just an old retired guy who swears a lot. Tobin writes ugly stories about bad people doing horrible things. You can pick up his six-book horror series, The Aphotic, wherever you buy your books. He'd really like it if you did.